Friday, October 28, 2011

Teaser for Chapter 1

Aloha and welcome!  This is my brand new blog for my new story called, "Aloha Oe".  Please take a look around at the pictures of the characters and the places I talk about in the story.  I was born and raised in Honolulu, so trust me, I know what I'm talking about.  Here is a teaser for Chapter 1.  The story will go live on fanfiction.net on Friday, November 4th.  I can't wait to share it with you all.

Teaser:


Taking a sip from her soda that Ben had politely gotten for her, Bella took a glance around the room.  Her entire body seemed to tense up as a familiar set of green eyes locked with hers.  She had seen them before in Port Angeles when she had accompanied her mother into a coffee shop.  They were staring at her with the same intensity as before.  Bella swallowed heavily and took in the way his brows furrowed as he stared at her, his straight nose, full lips, and angular jaw.  He was extremely good-looking, but also looking at her like she did something wrong.  It was his hair that shocked her most of all though, being that it was in complete disarray and peculiar shade of bronze that she hadn’t seen before that first time she saw him in the coffee shop.  She quickly looked away, her face feeling like it was on fire, and turned around so that she was facing Angela and Ben.  When she peaked over her shoulder, the green eyed guy was still staring at her.

“Hey, Ben,” Bella said, clearing her throat.  “Who’s that guy over there with the wild hair?  The one that is glaring at me.”

She watched as Ben took a glance over her shoulder, and then his eyes scanned the crowd.  Bella wondered if the guy was gone. 

“Well, I don’t see anyone glaring at you, but there’s only one guy I see with wild hair.  Are you talking about the guy in the long sleeved black shirt sitting in the armchair?”

Bella peaked over her shoulder again.  That was him all right…except now his stare was directed at the empty fireplace.

“That’s him,” Bella confirmed.

Ben chuckled a little and took a sip of his drink.

“That’s Edward Masen.”

~ NoelleSeven

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